Written for the Carpe Diem Challenge #53: write a Tan Renga.
Tan Renga is a two stanza poem with 5-7-5 and 7-7 syllables (5-7-5-7-7). Unlike a Tanka written by one poet, Tan Renga is written by two. Poet One writes the 5-7-5 and Poet Two completes 7-7.
11 OCT CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI PROMPT:
Oliana’s “flying home”
in rays of a setting sun
flies home…………….(Oliana of Traces of the Soul)
in rays of setting sun
gliding with feathered trim
into the deepening night.