4 thoughts on “First Light Haiku

  1. Julie Montinieri

    At first I thought “confluence” might be a better word. In light of the comments above, now I see how congruence is better. It’s purposeful, not happenstance, like a confluence of things could be.


  2. jhanagan2014 Post author

    Thanks, Julie. I see how confluence could work well, too. Isn’t it fascinating how one word can change the texture of a verbal portrait? As you picked up, I was thinking of the harmonious interplay of the morning sun and the fading moon, so congruence felt more interactive.



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